Sync problem..
Well is is pretty nice except for the sync problem numerous people will comment on. Fix that and it would be good.
Sync problem..
Well is is pretty nice except for the sync problem numerous people will comment on. Fix that and it would be good.
Nice style
Really nice flash with great artistic style and coloring. Story could have been a little more interesting but still very good.
Very well done
I'm not really quite sure what I just saw but I liked it. Very professional and cleanly done. Nice job.
Good but could have been better
Well this was a very good flash, but it could have been done much better. The songs didn't integrate or mesh well together at all, and the sound quality of a few were less than satisfying. Still a nice flash, good job.
Hrm...
Actually a step down from the rest of your work. Still good, but not as funny as some others.
Cool
Well done, very crisp animations and well synced, good job.
Hillarious
Actually made me laugh out loud. Shows how humor can be basic and still effective. Maybe some improvement could be made on the animation but still very funny.
Gotta start somewhere.
Well it is a start, next time try to incorporate a more solid plot that we can understand. Also, try to draw everything, including the background. Even if you aren't the best artist, Newgrounders will respect your effort and you will become a better artist.
I'll definitely put my new skill to the test for the next installment. Stay tuned
Surprisingly good.
Well the art could use some work, but it was still a surprisingly good submission. The animation was quirky and fit well with the song. Keep working and keep it up.
Well done.
Nice animation and timing with the music, which fits very well. Very nice.
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