Nice style
Really nice flash with great artistic style and coloring. Story could have been a little more interesting but still very good.
Nice style
Really nice flash with great artistic style and coloring. Story could have been a little more interesting but still very good.
Very well done
I'm not really quite sure what I just saw but I liked it. Very professional and cleanly done. Nice job.
Hrm...
Actually a step down from the rest of your work. Still good, but not as funny as some others.
Hillarious
Actually made me laugh out loud. Shows how humor can be basic and still effective. Maybe some improvement could be made on the animation but still very funny.
Gotta start somewhere.
Well it is a start, next time try to incorporate a more solid plot that we can understand. Also, try to draw everything, including the background. Even if you aren't the best artist, Newgrounders will respect your effort and you will become a better artist.
I'll definitely put my new skill to the test for the next installment. Stay tuned
Surprisingly good.
Well the art could use some work, but it was still a surprisingly good submission. The animation was quirky and fit well with the song. Keep working and keep it up.
Well done.
Nice animation and timing with the music, which fits very well. Very nice.
Nothing special at all...
Quite frankly, this is a web page with a song in the background. These laws are only enjoyable to those who don't know that every state has these types of laws. If they were to just go to the website they would find that this flash is just a copy and paste extravaganza which, in my opinion, doesn't deserve acclaim. Try actually animating something next time like you have done a few times in the past.
Age 35, Male
PA, USA
Joined on 11/4/04